Wednesday, November 6, 2013

NYC Midnight's Flash Fiction Challenge 2013... Round 1, Part 2.

1,000 words max.  Written over a weekend.  Had to be action/adventure in a blimp with a tombstone.

Mary

Mary paused and cradled her bulging belly.  She leaned her shoulder against the corridor wall and let her satchel fall to the floor.  The stone walls wept and the moisture dampened her green frock, darkening it nearer to the jet of her hair.  Her face was full and florid.  She could hear footsteps down the dank hallway behind her.  The echoing footfalls compelled her forward.

Mary was being followed, no doubt, by members of the Mayor’s all-female security detail.  They were coming for her now; for her and her unborn child.  She knew this Mayor.  She knew his sour temperament and knew the folds of his chins and prodigious gut.  She knew his sour scent and his eminent brutality.

Mary saw light creeping into the hallway in the distance and was less afraid.  It was early morning and the really bad things only happened at night.

Mary poked her head out into daylight and felt the sun warm her neck.  Ahead of her stood a cavernous building perched on the side of a stone precipice.  It was built from corrugated metal with the Mayor’s seal, a coiled purple viper, painted on the side facing Mary and the city-state on the hill.  The viper was a warning.  People may come, but no one leaves.  Above her the sounds of the citizens beginning to rouse were audible.  They awoke at their leisure.  That was the trade-off; a life free of hard work in exchange for complete political subjugation.  With no one in sight, she ran.

The metal edifice contained a tremendous purple balloon with a white gondola attached to the bottom.  Two massive duct fans splayed out from either side of the gondola.  A door to the cab swung open and a dark-skinned woman gestured for Mary to join her rapidly.  The woman helped Mary up into cab and swung the door closed.  “They are coming!” cried Mary as she found the open seat.  Again she cradled her protruding belly.  A third woman sat behind the controls in a cockpit seat and started flipping switches in rapid succession.

A low growl sounded from the engine as the fans started to turn.  The great balloon’s skin stretched taut and it lifted from the ground.

The rear door of the hangar swung open violently and slammed against the metal wall, sending reverberations through the space and through the blimp.  The three women all turned to look out the rear window.  “Guards!” Mary yelled.  A dozen women armed with blades of varying shapes and sizes had spilled into the hangar and were running towards the airship as it lumbered off the ground.  The driver pressed a button above her head and one whole wall of the building began to fold down from the top, accompanied by the noise of metal scouring metal.  The guards drew closer as the dirigible gained clearance from the ground.  Its rise was halted with a snapping jolt.

The pilot unbuckled herself from her seat and stuck her head out the window.  “The tether!  The tether is still on!  Someone has to get it.”  The dark-skinned woman swung the door open.  She laid flat on her stomach and reached over the edge.  She stretched as far as she could but couldn’t quite reach the rope.  “I can’t get it!” she yelled.  “Mary, can you hold my ankles?”  Mary slid off her chair and pinned her legs to either side of the door, knees bent.  She hoped her legs and arms could support the other woman’s full weight.  Mary grabbed hold of the woman’s ankles and let her slide further out the door. 

The guards had just reached the ground under the blimp.  They swung their weapons angrily.  The dark woman hung precariously from the door of the gondola, reaching with both hands for the underside of the coach where the tether attached to the blimp.

The front wall of the hangar was now fully open, revealing an expansive view of the densely populated land below.

One of the guards slashed at the dangling woman as she lengthened her arms and body to the extent physics would allow.  The leading edge of the guard’s small axe made contact and sheared the woman’s hand clean off.  Her scream echoed through the hangar and through the whole of the valley below.  The downward pressure on the airship released and it resumed its ascent as the tether had also been severed.

Mary pulled the injured, shrieking woman back into the cab and laid her prone on the floor.  She stared at the place where the woman’s hand should have been.  Blood spurted out in iambic meter.  Short, long, short, long. 

Mary took her bag off her shoulder and dumped its contents onto her vacated seat.  She found the scarf she was looking for and tied it tightly around the elbow of the bleeding woman, now silent from the shock or the pain.  Mary pushed herself back against the wall, trying to keep from looking at the gaping wound.  She focused her gaze between her own legs at one of the vials that had rolled from her satchel.  It was hand calligraphed: pennyroyal and blue cohosh.

Mary grabbed the vial and turned to the open window.  She dropped the bottle from the gondola and watched it fall into the makeshift cemetery at the base of the cliff.  It shattered onto the tombstone of one of the Jumpers.  Behind them several dozen guards stood at the edge of the crag and watched the airship make its way slowly upward; their impotence due to the Mayor’s own fear of guns. 


Mary allowed herself to envision her unborn son for the first time.  She could almost see his face and hoped he would be neither as fearful nor as brutal as his father.


Friday, October 25, 2013

Sixfold Winter 2013 - Rondo in White

This is my submission for Sixfold's winter 2013 issue.

Rondo in White

For those of you not familiar, Sixfold is a completely writer-judged journal.  It is a pretty neat concept.  As long as your piece is still alive in the voting, you vote on up to 6 other people's manuscripts.  There are several rounds of voting to determine the best pieces.  The top pieces are included in a journal.

The part that is most interesting to me is that you will get written feedback from at least 6 other writers.

This is my first time entering.

Thanks for the look.  Would love to hear what you think.  I took a bit of an experimental approach, writing my short story as a rondo with an A-B-A-C-A-B-A structure.

Tuesday, September 24, 2013

NYC Midnight's Flash Fiction Challenge 2013... Round 1, Part 1.

Contest Info: Flash Fiction Challenge 2013

You get a writing prompt on Friday night at 11:59 PM EDT.  You have 48 hours to write a short story of less than 1,000 words.  You are given a genre, setting and object that must be included.  The first round has two stories, this is the first.  The top five writers in each of the 25 groups moves to the second round.

My prompt:  Fantasy, in a tree house, with a pumpkin.

My entry:

"The White Cup"

The rainwater was sloshing over the side of the gutter above the back door.  Rachel and Samuel inched the heavy slider open, trying not to make a sound.

“OK, you go first and untie the rope ladder.  I’ll hold the cup and follow you up since I’m a stronger climber.”

“You are NOT a stronger climber but we don’t have time to argue.  See you up there.”  Rachel bolted out into the rain towards the corner of the yard where an old wind-beaten tree house was perched between three stern oaks.

Samuel followed, plodding up the ladder, steadying himself warily on the wet rungs.  He paused for a second as he always did to run his finger along the long white scar that marked the larger of the two trees.  Lightning struck this tree many years ago and wrenched the bark from it, crown to base.  When he reached the top he handed the paper cup to his sister, freeing his second hand for the hoisting maneuver required to gain entry to the fort, pulling himself under a driftwood sign reading “The Delight.”

The Delight was a rough-hewn, single room structure, with its worn and wrinkled floorboards positioned fifteen feet above the ground.  The walls were painted plywood which stopped halfway up, giving way to large openings that served as windows.  This being a beach town, the fort was adorned with the prizes of generations of sea-going children.  There were beach glass mosaics and huge clam shells.  Shark tooth necklaces were dangling from an old hurricane lantern, itself dangling precariously from the rafters.  Two large horseshoe crab carapaces hung from rusty nails.  The centerpiece of the Delight is a giant ship’s wheel fastened to one wall below the window.  Half the wheel rose above the window, and half fell below.  It was a gift to the twins for their ninth birthday.

Samuel joined Rachel in the center of the room, away from the rain splattering off the sills of the windows.  They sat cross-legged with their plunder between them.  It was a white paper cup with a green and black image of a siren emblazoned on the side.

“What if Mom finds out?” asked Samuel loudly, straining to be heard over the din of the rain pelting the roof.

“Don’t chicken out on me now Sam.  We’ve come this far.  We have to know.  Besides, she’s not gonna find out.”

“I’m not sure Rach.”

“Oh god, I’ll go first.”  Rachel took the cup and pulled the lid off.  She lifted the cup to her face and took a sniff.  She recoiled.  “Ugh, this smells like burnt toast.”  She pinched her nose and started to drink.  Grimacing, Rachel pulled another big swig and handed the cup to Samuel.  She took a glance over Samuel’s shoulder, towards the house.  The rain was really picking up now.

“I can’t do it.”

“It’s not that bad.  Really.  Just do it.  I already drank half.  I’m still alive.”

“It smells like a pumpkin fart.”  Samuel closed his eyes and drank.  And kept drinking.  He slammed the empty cup down in defiance and looked at his sister.  Her mouth was agape.

“I know.  I am awesome.”

Rachel stared past him and, without closing her mouth, slowly raised her arm and pointed.  Samuel turned around and almost jumped out of his skin.  The rain was coming down in sheets.  In the distance, beyond the house, a massive tidal wave was rapidly approaching.

Rachel moved to the window and looked out.  “Oh.  My.  God.”

Samuel rose to his feet and got his sea-legs beneath him.  He felt a surge of energy coursing through his body and started barking orders.  “Batten the hatches!  Take down the topsail!  We gotta abandon ship!” 

Rachel had madness in her eyes.  She grabbed the two horseshoe helmets off the wall and handed one to Samuel.  “Take this brother.  We are going to ride this bad boy out.”  She handed him one of the shark teeth necklaces.  “For luck.” 

“Are you nuts?  Look at that monster!  This old lady can’t handle it.  We’re going to higher ground.”  Samuel climbed out one of the windows and clambered up to the roof.  He was reaching for a branch on the lightning oak when he heard his sister’s voice.  “Sam, where’s the heart of this beast?  I have to turn into the swell to have a chance!”  She was behind the ship’s wheel.

“Rachel!  Get up here now!  The Delight wasn’t made for this.  Don’t be stupid!”

Rachel focused in the distance, hands steady on the wheel.  Salt water licked the hem of her skirt as the ship heaved and rocked in the waves.  “I’m not leaving my ship!”

Samuel froze.  He couldn’t leave Rachel behind.  Lying on his stomach Samuel slid his way out onto the figurehead sticking out from the gable end of the Delight’s roof.  He was riding on a sculpture of a nude siren with long flowing hair and a star-shaped crown.  He yelled down to Rachel.  “Starboard!”

Rachel turned the giant wooden wheel and the Delight dutifully turned to the right.  Water was up to her waist now and the wind shifted the rain into her face. Rachel almost couldn’t hold the wheel.

“Steady!” Samuel screamed as the big one approached.  “Hold her steady!”  He could feel the Delight begin to yaw.  “Steady!”

The big wave was taller than the Delight.  It was just about to overtake the ship when Samuel felt Rachel’s hand on his ankle. He reached back and pulled her up onto the figurehead alongside him just as the surge smashed the ship’s keel into kindling.  They held their breath and clung to the siren as chaos raged around them.

“Sam!  Rachel!  You guys up there?”

Rachel and Samuel were lying alongside each other, hands intertwined, clutching the white cup.  Samuel crawled to the door and peered down at his mother on the ground below the tree house.  “What’s up mom?”


“Have you seen my pumpkin spice latte?”

Short First Post

Basically I need a place to share my writing.  This will be that place for the time being.

Cheers,

BACR